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Monday 13 October 2014

Akansha-Rewrite the Ending- Holiday reading -1

Rewrite the Ending

If you could rewrite the ending of the story what would happen?  Write a paragraph explaining what you think should have happened.
Post it onto your blog with the following information.
- Title The fairy house Fairy jewels
- Author Kelly Mckain
- Type of Book Drama
- Why your ending is better
My ending is better because the fairy’s sussed on what they were doing.

“Now that,’’ said Bluebell,’’is a very good idea.’’ And with that they  all sprang to their feet, grabbed each other’s afternoon sunshine.

1 comments:

Saruja said...

Hi Akansha
I really like how you Re- Write the end.
I also like that you use "SPEECHMARK" thats great to see.
Keep up the great work.

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